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Elements to add to my story

Comparing “the hate U give“, to the story that I’m going to write will be interesting. I don’t think the two stories are really going to vibe together. I think I’m gonna go for a different tone in my story. The characters are going to have way different personalities. In “the hate U give“ the characters are all children/young adults/teenagers, and I think my story is going to be more about adults, to give it more of a mature theme. I’m still thinking everything through and I don’t really know the character traits that I’m going to give my characters yet. I’m a much better writer when I just wing it, and then go through and add details. I’m not sure which six word story I’m going to use for my story yet so I’m not really sure which conflict I’m going to use. The 6 word story I used was “for sale; baby shoes, never worn“. I think this would be a great one to have kind of an emotional appeal to the story. The reader might have an attachment/have an emotional feel because in my story I was planning on the baby dying. So that story I might write might be extremely sad, and I might develop the characters for when they were younger. Maybe the baby died because of karma. Maybe the mom or dad did something awful when they were younger and God wants them to pay. Something that could have detail like, that I don’t necessarily need to believe in. The other one Would also have an emotional appeal the six word story at that I chose was “please this is everything I have“. I was planning on basing it around a family whose dad got involved in the mafia, and he made a mistake and they came after him. They wanted everything the family had or they were going to take the kids away.They couldn’t involve the police either because then the dad would be going to jail for something that he didn’t do. If anyone has an attachment to their family, and their family means a lot to them this will be emotional.

Setting in “The Devil and Tom Walker”

In “The Devil and Tom Walker” it is very important that Washington Irving uses setting to utilize the hypocrisy of the Puritans at the time. There are characters that are revealed throughout the story that are important to the setting. In the story the devil is it name because Tom thinks that it will give him power. Tom called the devil “Old Scratch”, and other names he was given were “ Black huntsman“, “ The black miner”, and “ The wild huntsman“. In the story Tom lives in a swamp, and this adds to the spooky feeling of the devil. The setting is also super important because at the time (1727), people were incredibly religious. So it’s kind of ironic that Tom is making a deal with the person everyone around him hates or despises. Tom is so greedy he doesn’t care about What anyone else thinks of him. He doesn’t care that he’s making a deal with the devil, he only cares that he’s making money off for himself. The story takes place in Boston. Kid the pirate buried his money near Boston, and Tom wanted it. So that’s why he made the deal with the devil, because of his greed. If Tom wasnt looking for kid the Pirates treasure, then maybe we won’t realize how greedy he was. The whole reason he ran into the devil was because he took the shortcut, and started digging for treasure. He found a skull and a hatchet. And the devil came out and offered him a deal. Tom questioned what he was doing on this land, because it belong to Deacon Peabody. The devil explain to him that the trees represented people that he had made deals with. Tom didn’t realize that the devil also had a wood burner, and he used the trees to create heat for himself. Which is a metaphor of using people. This was a Porten setting because it was foreshadowing what would later happen to Tom after he made the deal with the devil. The reader is knew no good was going to happen after Tom made the deal with the devil.

Comedy in The Hate U Give

In the book “The Hate U Give”, There isn’t much comedy yet… I don’t know if there will be. In the book there was a shooting at one of the school parties the main character went to, named Starr. I really don’t think it would be appropriate to add humor in the book when this is happening. Shootings are such a big thing nowadays, I think people would be offended if the author added a sense of humor after a shooting just happened. In the beginning of the book there was my mild humor. Here and there at find myself smiling over something I related to when I was at a party. There was a few moments where Starr was awkward because she didn’t have people to talk to and the author kind of made it humorous. I think that would be an example of farce comedy. I think this because Starr is put in a situation, awkwardness, and she does her best to make it not awkward. I also kind of found it funny relating to the mean girls that we’re treating Starr poorly at the beginning of the book. They were so cringe it was hilarious. This is almost an example of comedy of manners because these girls think they’re better than everyone, and find it OK to treat Starr poorly because she doesn’t go to their school or dress like they do or hang out with the people that they hang out with. There is also some references about drugs and gangs and I think could be kind of considered humorous to the right person. This would be an example of low comedy due to the fact that they are almost like “dirty jokes“ but drug related… But other than that there is no comedy yet in the book “The Hate U Give”. I think the author is going to try to add a few ideas of comedy later on in the book. The book is so popular for teenagers, I think it would need to have more sense of comedy/humor. Teenagers love to laugh in my opinion

Characterization in The Hate U Give

Characterization in books/stories are super important for the reader. It can be difficult as an author to make sure the reader thinks of a character a certain way. The author only can use words to do this, which adds another level of difficulty. The author of the book “The Hate U Give”, does a really nice job characterizing the people in his book.

The main character/narrator of the book is Starr Carter. She is described as a black girl who attends a primarily white school, called Williamson Prep. She used to go to a black school called Garden Heights. She still stays in touch with her friends from her old school. Starr is perceived in my eyes, from the way the author describes her, as a crowd pleaser. She seems to always have nice things to say, and also seems to hang out with people that maybe aren’t the nicest to her and doesn’t mind. She seems like a genuinely good girl with good intentions. The author opened the book with Starr at a party with some of her old friends. Starr never hesitates to talk to someone she hasn’t seen in awhile. She was checking up on friends and seeing how they were doing the whole party. When the party heard gunshots, Starr ran to the car with one of her old friends named Khalil. When she was in the car she immediately thought of her friend she went to the party with, and texted her to make sure she was okay. The author does a great job making sure I, the reader, have good thoughts about Starr and makes sure i really know what’s going on in her head. When I know what’s going on in someone’s head, you truly know who someone is. But it’s hard to say what going to happen next in the story with her. It seems like nothing could go wrong with her, she’s nice, friendly, popular. I think the author is really focusing on her good side so he can expose who she really is down the line. I think we are going to watch Starr grow and come to some big realizations in this book. It makes sense with the plot diagram. The story starts off a certain way, there’s a conflict, and then the author leaves the reader on a cliff note, OR they leave you feeling just the way you felt when you started the book. I’m waiting to get to know Starr even more.

The Hate U Give

The book I chose to read is called “The Hate U Give”. I’m not much into reading so I chose this book because it was in the top ten books good for teenagers. I haven’t finished a book that I haven’t needed to read in school in I don’t know how long. So we will see if I like this one.

The book starts with the character Starr Carter, who is the narrator of the book. In the beginning action Starr went to a party with her friend Kenya. Kenya made Starr feel super uncomfortable/out of place at the party because she accused her of being stuck up. Starr attends school at Williamson Prep, which the majority of the students are white (Start is black). Kenya goes to a public school where the majority is black called Garden Heights (Kenya is black). Later in the chapter we come to find out that Kenya and Starr are friends because they share a brother named Seven. They also went to the same elementary school before Starr started going to prep school. At the party Kenya was gossiping, talking behind people’s back, talking about boys, all the teenage girl stuff and she at one point left Starr all alone. Starr kept some conversations going with some of her former classmates from Garden Heights Elementary. She saw her childhood best friend Khalil, which she hadn’t seen in ages. Then all of a sudden everyone at the party heard an outbreak of gunshots. Start runs to Khalil’s car and texts Kenya to see if she’s okay. In Khalil’s car, Khalil explained that they can’t have a party without having a shooting, and that it was most likely a dispute between some local gangs. Khalil played Starr his favorite albums by Tupac called “Thug Life”. Khalil told Starr that thug life stands for “The hate you give little infants f***s everybody”.

I think it’s pretty cool there’s a book about black school culture. I don’t have any experience or knowledge about those types of schools. I also think it’s really good that we already know where the title of the boom came from. Hopefully there’s better stuff to come, there isn’t much of a story now.