Finishing My Story

My first initial concept was to make it a really simple story and be able to get right to the good part, but looking at my final version of my short story I had included a lot and made it flow nicely. It has changed by the dialogue and how some of the characters act in the situation they’re in. It changed because I wanted to make the story more interesting for the reader to read. My thoughts on my story is that I have many things to change to make it more complete, it came out better then I expected it would. I like the flow of it and how the characters interact with each other in the story. Another thing I like about the story is that it’s not that boring to read and I tried to make it so the reader can have an emotional feeling to some of the characters. The thing that I don’t like about it is that I  didn’t really explain my characters that well and I should do that so my reader knows each character’s personalities. I also forgot a character and I have to find a way to somehow to include them in my short story.

Well about book 1, I forgot it was even in my backpack and I’m still in the same place I was two weeks ago, so I don’t have an opinion on the whole book right now. I’ll get to that when I actually finish it. I did get a second book today though. It’s called ‘We’ll always have summer’ by Jenny Kahn. I think think this book will be intriguing and a story I will enjoy by looking at the first page. My book choices don’t really have an affect on each other, I honestly just read whatever I find most interesting and if I don’t like it I won’t keep reading it.