Bro! You ready to party?

“Please, this is everything, I swear.” by Orson Scott Card is the quote i used for my story. I picked this quote, because I think it has a lot of potential to go multiple different ways. For example, it could be about a guy getting tortured and he is telling the person all that he knows so he doesn’t get killed and says the quote, or what I picked is two guys saying the quote to a cop. My story is basically about two douchey college freshmen who are trying to be popular so they try to throw a party in a day. The main two characters are Chaz Nug” and Chug, they are a sort of Cheech and Chong characters but in college and very very very douchey. The idea for my story came from all the douchey party bro stereotypes and seeing all the dumb college people in our town and I wanted to put them into a story. When I started I was going for more of a dumb take on the story, but after reviewing my plot and doing the character paper, I figured it would be a better story if I put more depth into it. The character paper was very helpful because it made my main protagonist more dynamic and round, it also made me create a better antagonist and give him a lot more motive and reason why Neil (the antagonist) hates both of the protagonists so much. Originally my main antagonist was gonna be a Cop that is always trying to catch them. At first I wanted to do a story about being just trying to be annoying college guys, but now it is more like a back and for of conflicts and problems and solutions. After doing the character analysis stuff it made my setting better, developing the characters make me have to think about how they are, what they want, what they can do, and what their setting allows. For example it wouldn’t make sense if in my story it was taking place in the high school if they are college.




The Fair is usually very boring for me, but this year is was actually fun. Usually I do soccer games and practice, go to the fair like once and the rest of the time sit alone like a loser. During this Fair break  I worked like 20 hours and made some easy money, I went hiking one day, hung out with friends a couple days at the fair, say Recreation perform (I have friends in it).

Even though year I actually did things but the best story of the Fair vacation was the last weekend. Friday around 2, I met up with a girl I had a “”thing” with, for all intents and purposes we will call her M.  M and I walked around the fair, did a couple laps and eventually ended up at one of the fish stands where you throw ping pong balls into the little glass fish bowls. I gave one of the workers a 5 and we were given a tub of 70 balls. Unlike our relationship, we were successful at the game, with the 70 balls we were able to get 8 balls into the bowls. With our success we were able to get a special tank with a one ”fancy” fish.  After that we took another lap around and headed out so I could walk M back before I had to go to work. Like alway I was running late because she wanted to stop and talk about our “relationship” (has quotes because it was a joke) and saying things like “I want to date but I don’t” “I still love my ex but want to be with you” Like what!?!? It’s been like 2 months of us talking! You couldn’t of said this before? You might be asking yourself “What did you do?” or “What happened?” and I will get to that but have to finish the story. So I dropped her off and drove (probably a little over the speed limit) to work and was lucky to clock in like 30 seconds before my shift started. Now back to things with M, when I got back from work we both ignored each other till the next day. I was a little ticked off about the whole situation so I cut ties with M. Basically the Moral of the story is that DO NOT try to date a freshman.